Final Fantasy WoL Fandub [3rd Wave Started!]
VicMoz for Argath Thadolfus
"A knight apprentice in service to the marquis of Limberry. Arrogant and short-tempered, Argath believes commoners to be no more than fodder for the noble class."
Age: 16
Voice Type & Personality: Medium High to Medium Low. Arrogant, Brash, Noble. (I'd prefer an accent to match his noble stature)
My name is Argath, a knight in His Excellency the marquis Elmdore (mar-key Elm-door) de Limberry's household. Well, truth be told, I am a knight apprentice. As are you, if I'm not mistaken.
[solemnly recounting his family's history]
My own house was once respected as highly as House Beoulve (Bay-oolve), you know. At least, until my grandfather was captured during the war. He turned traitor, thinking to buy his freedom with the lives of his friends. But his freedom scarce outlived his honor. He was not a dozen paces out their gate when the dagger found his back. Killed by some common squire, no more a knight than I.
[egging his comrade on to finish an enemy]
Do it, Ramza! She fights as a Corpse. Let her become one for true! She's a foe and a traitor - an enemy of House Beoulve! The world has no place for such wretches. Her claim to life is forfeit! Spare her now, and you place your seal on the warrants for our own deaths! It's her or us, Ramza! Strike her down!
Well, I'm sorry to report that you did not follow my rules/recording guidelines, so this audition is void, but I'll still give you feedback as there were things that could be improved on even if this audition was accepted. I could only hear your audition out of my left side, so that would've been a no-go, there were a lot of noises coming out of your mouth that detracted from the audition (ie. clicks, swallowing), and that final line sounded as if you were trying to stay quiet. If you're recording at night or don't want to disturb your neighbors, then you'll need to record either at an ideal time or place that will allow yourself to bring that last line to its full potential.
Thanks for the feedback despite my error in my submission. It is greatly appreciated!
I welcome anyone to resubmit auditions if they are able to improve upon it. But if I do not hear an improvement upon resubmission, I cannot promise I will be able to submit feedback for further improvement.