Final Fantasy WoL Fandub [3rd Wave Started!]
AlyVA for Agrias Oaks
A Holy Knight part of the Lionsguard, the personal guards to the royal family. She is a strong woman with unwavering loyalty to the princess."
Age: 20
Voice Type & Personality: Medium to Medium Low. Headstrong, Noble, Righteous. (If anyone played Persona, I'd imagine her voice similar to Tara Platt's portrayal Mitsuru Kirijo)
I am Agrias (Aay-gree-ass) Oaks, a knight of the Lionsguard. My companions and I have journeyed from Orbonne (Or-bahn) Monastery seeking sanctuary. By the grace of Saint Ajora, I beg you, lay open your gate!
[Berating a man for not helping]
I would not accept your help if you offered it! A true knight is all too eager to set right what he has let go amiss. The Lionsguard will serve the king's justice. Lavian (La-vee-aahn), Alicia. We leave at once!
[attempting to assure the Princess of her duty]
To turn a blind eye to this is to forsake the hallowed oath I swore: to defend this kingdom at the peril of my life. My sword is sworn to you as well, and I mean for it to serve. Your safety requires that this plot be stopped. It is not lightly that I abandon duty, but only for the love I bear you and our kingdom. I can but pray that you forgive me, Highness.
Your tone was almost one-note, until the middle of the third line when your tone shifted to gentle, which I'm glad you caught. As for the other two lines, the trouble is that I could not feel conviction behind your words. As a proud knight, Agrias should have a more commanding tone to her voice, especially when she's calling for the gate to be lowered or for her fellow knights. Aside from that, your voice sounds a bit too...young for Agrias. Yes, she's 20, but she's quite mature for her age while your voice would have suited the young princess more. Thank you for your audition.
Thanks for the honest critique! I definitely do have a younger sounding voice, haha. I'll keep your feedback in mind for future auditions!