Final Fantasy WoL Fandub [3rd Wave Started!]
Wolfeyboy for Zalbaag Beoulve
Second born son of House Beoulve, and the current leader of the Order of the Northern Sky. A man devout in the teachings of the church, his soul as a knight does not tolerate injustice."
Age: 28
Voice Type & Personality: Medium Low to Low. Proud, Noble, Righteous. (I'd prefer a British accent to match his noble stature)
[praising his brother on a battle well fought]
I heard about Gariland. They say you made short work of those brigands. Now you're truly the right to call yourself a Beoulve (Bay-oolve). Father would be proud.
[angered at the thought his brother would think his own family were traitors]
Enough! Who have you become, that you do not trust your own family? Begone from my sight! Return to Eagrose (Ee-gross) and trouble me no more!
[steeling himself to go against his own family in the name of justice]
You feast on power, Brother, but leave no place at the table for justice. The name Beoulve befits brave men who raise their swords in justice's name. You are no Beoulve!
Though I like your agressiveness from both Dycedarg and Zalbaag's later lines, your first lines for both are over-exaggerated. Yes, they're proud of their younger brother, but this pride should be more subdued. Picture them talking to their brother side by side in a more subdued tone than "HUZZAH!" Thank you for your auditions.
Very helpful feedback. I will take that into consideration. I'd like to resubmit with this new info in mind, if that's cool.