Final Fantasy WoL Fandub [3rd Wave Started!]
Odenip for Dycedarg Beoulve
"Eldest son of House Beoulve, former leader of the Order of the Northern Sky, and Duke Larg's most trusted advisor. Ambitious, he seems to be plotting something behind in the shadows..."
Age: 37
Voice Type & Personality: Medium Low to Low. Tactful, Intelligent, Scheming. (I imagine his voice to be similar to Jamieson Price or a young Patrick Stewart, but I do encourage original takes. I'd also prefer a British accent to accentuate his noble birth)
[proud of his brother's accomplishments]
I hear you were decorated for your first victory, Ramza (Rom-zah). They sing your praise from on high. You do honor to our name, my brother - and to me.
[reprimanding his brother for being reckless]
Might I pose a question, Ramza? What purpose do laws serve when even those who would enforce them choose not to pay them heed? Adherence to the rule of law is a knight's solemn duty. It falls upon us, as Beoulves, to bear the burden of example.
[defending himself against his "ungrateful" family]
Is it not I? I, who have dirtied my hands to keep yours clean? All that you are you owe to me! You ought be on your knees thanking me, yet here you stand in judgment!
Your second take was the best one, but your penchant to talk in cadence is a bit off-putting. It makes certain points sound robotic. As such, it makes the audition as a whole sound one note as I could not hear jubilation in the first line, nor anger in the last when his emotions should be running wild. You also have to be mindful of the build up of spit in your mouth, as it was evident in the last line when I heard some clicks. Thank you for your audition.
Thanks for the feedback!