Sweet Holiday: An anime-inspired romance short
saint starlin for Skye Saint
Skye is tall, cocky and arogant man but at the same time, is genuinely good guy. He can quite rude but at the same time, very seet.
I imagined him having quite a nasally but gruff voice (I oddly had Aaron Carter or Franky Munez's voice in my head while writeing him) but I'm open to ideas.
Leave that to me, Nena! I’ve got wonderful day planned for the two of us, trust me, it’s gonna be great!
This is a nice restaurant too so I’ll make this quick. Leave, now.
Exciting sure...but I wanted today to be special. It’s Italy, romantic junk. So far said romance has been fighting drunk morons and accidentally insulting you.
So a couple critiques. First off, you mispronounced several words and just in general sound REALLY stiff. Like...1980s Korean knock off anime dub stiff. Loosen up dude! You're forcing yourself to be more dramatic when just your normal voice talking would be fine. He's just on a casual date with his girlfriend, Don't put emphasis on random words and inflections either, just say the line as if you were talking to a friend or girlfriend in real life. NoBODY talks LIKE THIS in real LIFE! Maybe with a retake you could sound more in line but even beyond that you don't have the type of voice I'm looking for. I'm looking for someone with a bit of a nasally voice like who I mentioned in the description. But you can certainly try again.
Ngl i was sorta tryna be a bit ridiculous, but hey sometimes that will fit. But also im reading directly based on the spelling which is why a lot of it is mispronounced. But ye thats all I got.
Hey man. Its all good. Try giving it another shot. Im open to another attempt. And its pronounced Nee-na, not Nay-na. But thats a minor thing