Final Fantasy WoL Fandub [3rd Wave Started!]
Garrett Niall for Wiegraf Folles
"Leader of the Corpse Brigade, a group of bandits made of discarded soldiers in the aftermath of a long war. He seeks to rid the world of high-born nobles who would look down on common men like himself. When it comes to his war against the nobles, the ends justify the means."
Age: 35
Wiegraf is a passionate and proud man who has seen his share of battle. He fights for the men who did not receive due pay for their services in war, and seeks to create a future where the class system is abolished, no matter how extreme his methods of doing so. Even so, he is a man of honor who does not like to involve innocent people in his crusade.
[giving a compelling speech to a subordinate who wishes to flee from battle rather than fight]
So we fly - what then? Know you some happy haven in which we may alight? If we flee, they win once more. As they have always won. We must make for our children a fairer future than the past you and I have known. They must not suffer as we do! The stone we cast might raise only the smallest of waves, but see how they crash upon the shore! Waves rich with our blood...
[steeling himself before battle]
Your faces are known to me. But I did not know that you would one day kill my sister. Milleuda (Meh-loo-dah) deserved a better death - they did not even send proper knights to kill her! I will not flee before her murderers. I'll venge Milleuda's death or die in the trying!
[at the grave of his dearly departed younger sister]
Milleuda...pray forgive me. I thought to deliver swift vengeance, yet here I am before you, my own blade sheathed beside me as yours lies sheathed within the earth. I have failed at much, but I shall not fail you. Your killers will know vengeance! In this, at least, I shall not be disgraced.
Not bad, but you went completely ham on that second line. I would suggest to dial bit back a bit. I also caught a bit of background noise throughout your lines. Are you sitting down by chance? It was either a chair moving or the mic itself, but either way, it distracted a bit. Other than that, not bad for Wiegraf.
I'm sorry about that, I thought I got everything in noise reduction... Thanks for the tips!