Worm Full-Cast Production - Arc 1: Gestation
Valravn for Tattletale
Cocky, "I'm smarter than you" voice. In her late teens. Caucasian.
Spoken in a matter-of-fact tone of voice, as if aiding and abetting a supervillain is an everyday thing
“Well, Bug, a cape is gonna show up in less than a minute. You did us a solid by dealing with Lung, so take my advice. Someone from the Protectorate shows up, finds two bad guys duking it out, they’re not going to let one walk away. You should get out of here,” She said. She flashed me a smile, her eyes were glittering with mischief. (1.5)
Spoken in a matter-of-fact tone of voice, like you’re telling a story
“Let me tell you a little story. Correct me if I’m wrong on any of the details. Eleven years ago, just five years after capes really started showing up, there was a team operating hereabouts, calling themselves the Brockton Bay Brigade. Lady Photon, Manpower, Brandish, Flashbang, Fleur and Lightstar. They wind up taking on a villain in his own home and it’s a pretty decent fight. They beat him, and because he was a real bastard, he got sent straight to the Birdcage.” (3.12)
Condescending tone
“I’ll make you a deal, Glory Hole. You go in the vault, lock yourself in, and I don’t speak on the subject. I won’t say the one sentence that tears your family apart.” (3.12)
If I might offer some advice- your voice is perfect, but you keep the same flippant tone throughout each line. There's very little variation. Vary both the pitch and tone.
Thank you for your input! Is this better? https://soundcloud.com/sam-christine/valravn-tattletale5/s-PKEwUHxE8XS
Much better, especially on the first and last sections. The second section sounds too casual, like she's talking to a friend. The story is the buildup to her demand for her to get in the bank vault. It should have the same taunting energy as the last section. Also, for some reason your voice is only coming through on my right ear, and there are moments you breathe loudly into the mic.
Re-recorded the second line so it fits with the context. https://soundcloud.com/sam-christine/valravn-tattletale6/s-y63h4ORY3DI Unfortunately the audio quality is the best I can do until the more high-end mic I ordered gets here.
...Bruh you just changed how Tattletale sounds in my head, I love it <3