Star Wars X Sonic the Hedgehog: Shadow the Mandolorian
Bri Ley Ryder (aka TimeRunner) for Rouge the Bat (Cara Dune)
A former Freedom Fighter Dropper, Rouge the Bat enjoys an early retirement hunting gems throughout the galaxy. An easy going, knowledgable, and sexy Mobian bat, Rouge has turned the heads of many, but no man will tie her down. That is, until she ran into Shadow, who draws her into an adventure even she couldn't have seen coming.
1. (Friendly) Well, this has been a real treat. (Now with a touch of a seductive tone in her voice) But unless you want to go another round, one of us is going to have to move on, and I was here first.
2. (Incredulously) That's it? So, you can slip off the helmet, settle down with that beautiful young widow and raise your kids sitting here sipping spotchka?
3. (Angrily, but in a hushed whisper) This is insane! You said four troopers!
Very well done, though the first part was a bit monotone. Try adding some rhythm to your voice.
Thank you for the feedback. Would you like me to redo the first line per your suggestions?
If you could, that would be great.