Narbs' Attack on Titan Fandub Season 1
Jake Borton for Hannes
Hannes is a Garrison Regiment officer, and happens to be a drunk at the start of the anime. Despite this, he does his best to look after Eren, Mikasa, and Armin after they became orphans. He probably has a bit of rasp to his voice, and he could also be seen as a somewhat cocky type of person.
"Eren. You couldn't save your mother because you lacked the strength. And I... I couldn't stand up to that titan because I lacked the courage!" (Is beginning to get emotional)
"Don't worry, Carla, I'll take down the titan and save all of you!" (Is seemingly confident in his abilities, and is underestimating the titan's intimidating presence)
"I'm about to avenge your mother, and butcher the shit out of this thing!"
It was pretty good, but I'd say you should use the voice you did at the last couple lines with everything to keep it consistent. The first couple of lines felt like a completely different person.