Narbs' Attack on Titan Fandub Season 1
Pieman2025 for Miche Zacharius
Miche is a quiet fellow with a pretty deep voice. His skill as a soldier is second only to Levi, and he has a peculiarly strong sense of smell. He's eccentric in some ways, including sniffing new cadets, but he has a lot of leadership in him, and is motivated as a soldier.
"Humanity's first defeat will only come when we stop fighting. As long as we keep fighting, we haven't lost."
"*Sniff Sniff* ... Not as sharp as yours, anyway." (Referring to Erwin's nose)
*Battle cry as he raises his sword to the Beast Titan*
Your pitch and war cry were pretty good, but you could work on your delivery, and focus on reducing saliva noises. You can do this by really mouthing out what you're saying, and making sure your mouth isn't mostly closed, also drink water while recording and refrain from consuming sugary drinks or food before recording. Also try and eat some salty stuff like saltines. It all helps.
oh ok, I would give it another try with the tips you provided and hopefully, it comes to your liking.