Narbs' Attack on Titan Fandub Season 1
Alxmason for Keith Shadis
Keith is a man who had dreams working his way up the Survey Corps ranks, but eventually, he gave them up upon meeting Grisha Yeager, and taking on the role of Survey Corps Commander. He's a drill instructor during the training scenes, and he sounds the type. Definitely a more war-torn voice that can be raised at the drop of a hat.
"That's right. Average men aren't able to accomplish anything. Special people do exist. It's just that... I wasn't one of them." (Sort of reflecting upon himself)
"Why did you take that potato out just now?" (Confused at the fact that anyone would do such a thing out in formation)
"How very admirable! You should make good first-rate titan feed! Third squad! About face!" (Is a drill instructor during training)
Sounds kind of inhuman. Are you using any audio software to lower your pitch? And the volume could be worked on some, as well as delivery.
Also there are a lot of mouth noises, so I'd say drink water before each line and try to really mouth out what you're saying, it helps.
That’s funny you bring that up cause it was seeming like my recordings where much deeper then normal. I did it late at night I’ll redo the ones that I have feedback for and clean it up better! I really appreciate the feedback! Thank you!!