Persona 4 Abridged (Recasting)
Emmarlansdowne for Naoto Shirogane
Naoto is a first year high school student who doubles as a detective. Her personality is similar to that of her canon appearance, but exaggerated slightly. She's incredibly perceptive, and as a detective her diction is highly advanced for her age. Naoto has an obsession with solving cases, and is likely to make casual reference to other Murder-Mystery series. We have yet to meet Naoto's Shadow in the series, but when we do, we'll learn that her gender identity isn't as black and white as it seems, and that she is secretly terrified of how other people look at her because of it.
Naoto's voice should have a low-range, androgynous sound. Her speaking tempo will also need to be somewhat quick, as she'll be talking in mini-monologues a lot while deducing the case.
Example Voice:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Ft04LM80ICnmld8s_dADlaBNoqP04gk_/view?usp=sharing
I'm Detective Naoto Shirogane. I'm currently working with the Inaba police force to solve this serial murder case.
(Deducing)
You're somehow involved in a way unknown to the police. I can't say for sure what that role is, but I don't think any of you are the killer.
(Giving up her questioning for now, but still suspect)
I see. It appears I've wasted both our times then. Apologies. I'll bid you adieu.
My feedback: I think you've got the voice and performance down. Nothing for me to critique there...however the audio quality is a little jarring. When you speak it sounds like there's a slight buzz, or digital feedback happening that occasionally overtakes your lines. I've heard this happen a few times, and more times than not it's a sign of either a faulty or dying microphone. I don't think it'll affect judgement on your audition per say, but it is something to keep in mind for the future.