City Life: Evolve
JoshuaAT for Rick O'Hara
A detective who’s incredibly determined to end the war going on between the Mafia and the Scorpions and tends to go off on dangerous and somewhat irrational missions in the name of justice, which have made relations between the police and the gangs in the city quite strained. Due to having seen hundreds, if not thousands of lives displaced or ruined by both sides, he has become incredibly determined to end the suffering, even at the cost of his life. Over the course of the story, you and him will solve many mysteries together.
(telling the player about both gangs)
Their leader's a man by the name of Luis Salazar and the leader of the Mafia is a man named Edward 'Eddy' Lorenzo. Luis Salazar? He's cruel and merciless. Edward Lorenzo? He's cunning and devious.
(confident)
That's it, we have a perfect theory, decisive evidence and you're out of arguments. There's no way that you can run away from justice now!
(afraid, currently tied down to a chair)
Oh, God...you're sick! You're terrible, what the hell is wrong with you?! You're...you're just a monster!
Sure, I can certainly offer some feedback! In some of your auditions, I can hear you breathing into the mic, like at 0:07 or 0:12 in your audition for Geoffrey or at 0:32 in your audition for Rick. I'd also recommend lowering the volume that you're recording your voice at, since the volume of some of your auditions caps out at some points and it might fix that issue. Finally, could you please reply to this message with your Discord Name/ID, so that I can contact you in case you get any of the parts? Thanks!
Thank you for your feedback! I've been experimenting with the locations I record and the settings I can apply to my mic and have found ways to improve it. My Discord is jalex#8444