City Life: Evolve
AC for Sandra Garcia
Acting as the chief of police, Sandra Garcia has been working with the officers of the force to try to keep the city under control by keeping the damage done by the Scorpions/Mafia to a minimum. She doesn’t approve of Rick’s somewhat reckless personality, but has to agree that every now and then, he delivers solid results. Finally, she's fairly sympathetic towards those affected by the gangs' influence, especially to those who are being blackmailed into doing dirty deeds for them.
(introducing herself)
My name's Sandra Garcia, I heard that Rick took you on as his partner. Seeing that you captured this killer and found the truth, I can tell that you're after justice, just like everyone else here. Welcome to the team.
(scolding Rick)
As for you, Rick, I heard your desperate call and weren't you told to stay at the police department? I'm ashamed that you ran in there and got yourself captured. If it wasn't for your partner, you would've been killed.
(consoling a food thief)
I don't blame you for what you did, your family was starving and the gangs took everything from you. Rick, could you go bring her some food? Joe's Convenience Store will do the trick, just take this money and buy whatever you need.
Thanks for your audition as Sandra Garcia! If it helps you improve, my only critique would be that the 'I'm ashamed that you ran in there' part of your second line sounds a little bit whiney and breaks the serious tone that you set up with the first part of your line, but that's about it. I'll send you a DM over Discord if you get the part; it's good to see that you're so active on the site, too!
Ok, thanks for the feedback! I can always do a retake if you'd like.
It's OK, don't worry! I just thought I'd give a bit of critique to help you improve.