Persona 4 Abridged (Recasting)
Dreambomb for Naoto Shirogane
Naoto is a first year high school student who doubles as a detective. Her personality is similar to that of her canon appearance, but exaggerated slightly. She's incredibly perceptive, and as a detective her diction is highly advanced for her age. Naoto has an obsession with solving cases, and is likely to make casual reference to other Murder-Mystery series. We have yet to meet Naoto's Shadow in the series, but when we do, we'll learn that her gender identity isn't as black and white as it seems, and that she is secretly terrified of how other people look at her because of it.
Naoto's voice should have a low-range, androgynous sound. Her speaking tempo will also need to be somewhat quick, as she'll be talking in mini-monologues a lot while deducing the case.
Example Voice:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Ft04LM80ICnmld8s_dADlaBNoqP04gk_/view?usp=sharing
I'm Detective Naoto Shirogane. I'm currently working with the Inaba police force to solve this serial murder case.
(Deducing)
You're somehow involved in a way unknown to the police. I can't say for sure what that role is, but I don't think any of you are the killer.
(Giving up her questioning for now, but still suspect)
I see. It appears I've wasted both our times then. Apologies. I'll bid you adieu.
Forgot to say, but I would appreciate any and all feedback, thank you!
My feedback: I really like what you did here. I think the voice is an excellent fit for her, and you were able to keep a good pace on the longer lines, which is going to be very important for her. I did notice that there was some small reverb happening during the 2nd and 3rd lines, but that's an easy fix. Overall, awesome job!
I know its been quite awhile since you gave the feedback but thanks!