Persona 4 Abridged (Recasting)
GroovyAsh for Ryotaro Dojima
Much like Nanako, Ryotaro Dojima hasn't played much of a role in the series yet, although the episode where we get his backstory is coming up. To this point, he's attempting to be a good father to Nanako after the passing of her mother, but is also a workaholic, typical of the average Japanese adult. He's the lead detective of the serial murder case in Inaba and is partnered with Adachi. He gets very serious when it comes to work related matters, but has a light-hearted side around Nanako. His voice should aim for a lower-pitch, preferably something with a lot of bass, and a mature sound.
Example Voice:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/11NussWi2-qXh-3OBwNgRdY9w5AqEj2Qq/view?usp=sharing
I'm your uncle, Ryotaro Dojima, by the way...and this is Nanako. Say hi to your cousin Nanako.
(Tired coming home, but keeping a facade for Nanako, refers to Adachi in this scene)
You always said you wanted a pet dog, so I brought mine back from work.
(Confused, but also concerned)
I don't get it Adachi...how is it a couple of High School kids know more than we do...
My feedback: I think you've got a good pitch down for the voice. You also do a good job showing the exhaustion in Dojima's voice. I've really only got 2 things to note, one would be it's a bit quiet. This can be fixed with adjustments obviously, just something I wanted to note. And the 2nd would be the first line has that same exhaustion, though it should be a bit more energetic, since he puts on a façade for his daughter.
Thank you for the feedback! Since this audition I’ve gotten better at editing especially when it comes to volume! I really appreciate you taking the time to look at it!