Mass Effect Legacy Audio Drama : Pilot Episode
convito for Dekaan
- An Artificer and Combat Engineer within the 26th Armigier Legion.
- Very laidback, jokey personality. Enjoys light-hearted banter to keep moods high on tense operations.
- Delivery should be smooth in style - somewhat similar to Garrus.
[ sarcastic, light-hearted ] "I've got a better idea - let's stroll directly down that street right there, arm-in-arm, flaunting pina coladas and backchatting that one kid nobody liked in basic training. They'll find us so obnoxiously interesting that they'll refrain from opening fire just to hear the full story."
"That was a long time ago. We went our seperate ways, y'know? If you couldn't tell that already from how much better I am at Skyllian Five than you, I mean."
[ unnerved ] "Spirits..." [ yelling ] "You! Get to cover now!" [ nervous breathing ] "Any bright ideas, Staff Sergeant?"
This sounds really good - the third line was especially well-delivered! Any chance you could make the first two lines a little more relaxed/laidback?
Sure, I'll give it a shot as soon as I can.
How's this? https://soundcloud.com/convito/danconlin-dekaan-retake
That's a little better, there are still some words that sound forced or have too much emphasis on them. The tone should be similar to Garrus' overall, fairly smooth
Alright, one more shot. Figure if I can't get it right after this many tries, I'm clearly not meant for this part. https://soundcloud.com/convito/danconlin-dekaan-retake2