[CLOSED] Fallout New Vegas Redesigned - (Paid on audition)
joshua bellas for Chavez (Paid on audition)
Payment: $10
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Mexican drug cartel gangster. Medium/Deep voice.
This voice here at 1:51 <-------- (click here) (The man with the gun)
He needs to sound like a Mexican drug cartel gangster. Cold voice. Cold personality. Death stare. Doesn't raise his voice much but he instills fear.
(threatening someone) (Cold death stare) (Not yelling)
You just walked into the wrong camp, my friend. Hand over everything you've got and we might let you live.
(Someone convinces him to leave)
I got the message. You won't see me around here anymore.
(A guy says he comes from Eddie. You don't like Eddie)
(Cold voice) (Death stare) (Doesn't raise his voice but his voice instills fear)
You're from Eddie? I don't give a fuck about you or Eddie. You can tell Eddie to go fuck himself.
(You're scared but you're trying to act manly)
Take it easy, ok. Take it easy. I'm sorry, ok.
(A man threatens you)
You're not gonna let *me* live? Man, fuck you!!! (menacing) You're gonna learn some fucking respect! Me and my boys are gonna cut you up!
(A woman threatens you)
You're not gonna let me live? (puts hand up to his ear) Did I hear that correctly? Fuck you bitch! You got a mouth on you. (snaps his fingers) Teach this bitch some respect!! (Attacks)
(Someone convinces you to leave. Convinces you a rival gang will eventually get you)
(agreeing) Yeah...Eddie's gonna get us eventually. Might as well lay low. He's....getting closer.... All right then...... Pickings were slim around here anyway.....Time to leave.
(Someone tells you to leave. You're not leaving)
You want *me* to walk away? Motherfucker I ain't leaving! This is my town. Go fuck yourself!
(A person tries to walk away from you. You need thier money) (Cold death stare) (Not yelling)
Letting you walk away isn't how it works. Like I said before...give me *everything* you got. .....(sighs)....let's just do this the hard way (cracks knuckles) (Attacks you)
(You leave him in a room where he can't leave)
Don't leave me here!
(He says bye casually)
Yeah. See ya later.
Ok, yours is the closest I've seen so far. Could you redo two lines? Here's some audio feedback. Here are the changed lines: (Yells the word "Fuck you") ==> You're not gonna let *me* live? Man, fuck you!!! (snaps his fingers) Teach this bitch some respect!! (Attacks) (Brooding) (not yelling) (Brooding) ==> You want *me* to walk away? Motherfucker I ain't leaving
Audio feedback and direction: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B_WqsiLWP_nLY1hlVkRfVkhXWnM/view?usp=sharing
I changed the script to make it a gender-neutral script. So one line will work for guys and girls. Hard to explain. You have to listen to the audio clip above.
But in summation, please listen to the audio clip I sent you then do those two lines above in the way I describe them in the audio. And I think that should be a wrap.
I know exactly what you're saying. I thought that "Fuck you" was a little weak too. I'll PM you the revised lines
Hey, I just recently got a new mic that blows my old one out of the water. If you're interested, I'm willing to re-record my lines for Chavez in a mic that doesn't sound like crap. Plus, I feel like I've improved as a VA since then, so a second take might be even better than the first. If you're interested, send me an email at [email protected]