~Rise From The Ashes - Arc I ~ : Staff and Lead VAs (CLOSED)
Xarben for Achilles
Summary: Achilles is a bold, brave and somewhat extroverted teenage boy with a little too much energy to spare and a VERY protective and hyper-vigilant nature, with the potential to get pretty aggressive, snarky and defensive as a result, rashly jumping to conclusions a little too often. He also seems pretty distrustful and wary of strangers and is definitely not afraid to take any risks necessary to survive. His identity is...not quite as straight forward as it seems though, which is all that will be said to avoid going into major spoilers for Arc I, but he has a prominent role in both arcs, especially the second. He enjoys rock music, cool comics and video games, with an interest in baking and cooking, as well as trying new and daring things.
Note: Achilles is Bisexual, so his VA should be comfortable playing a relationship with another character of the same gender (In Arc II) and must be LGBTQ+ friendly.
Appearance: Arc I (Major role) and Arc II (Becomes a leading role from Halfway) - The lines are a mixture from both arcs, since ideally we would like to keep the same VA for consistency.
Personality: Extroverted, Bold, Brash, Fiery, Loud, Proud, Smug, Fun, Brave, Protective, Rash, Rebellious, Reckless, Distrusting, Egotistical, Misunderstood, Confident and internally rather Soft and Sensitive (the latter more-so in Arc II)
Voice: Loud and bold, pitch mid-low to mid. He should sound pretty snarky, being frequently sarcastic and teasing or insulting others. He should also sound pretty excitable, with the tendency to talk quite quickly at times and his voice and tone is EXAGGERATED to really convey his emotion. When angered, Achilles will frequently yell and curse, so Profanity will be required. He may also snarl or growl when especially furious, so prepare to warm up those vocal cords
(Confidently and reassuringly, a little loudly and protectively) Don't worry, Ashy. You're gonna be juuust fine, Kiddo. We're all looking out for you, every one of us, especially me. (Angered and threatening, growling at the end) I swear...if that bastard tries to lay another fucking finger on you, then I'll personally rearrange his Freaki-ing kneecaps. He can't keep us here forever - but we've gotta fight...*You* have gotta fight. Use those powers for their ultimate purpose...Nooo pressure or anything, juuust stating the facts. But yeah,...you MIGHT wanna move your ass now, or at least let me take over that task...
(Distrustful and wary, suspicion in his tone, some sarcasm) Uh, d'ya really think that's a good idea, Einstein? Just...waltzing off with strangers like that?! How do you know we can trust them? It's called 'Stranger Danger' for a reason, *duh*! What's not to guarantee that they'll sell our ass right back to that damn place the moment we get too close?! Nngh... I don't trust them, Ashy. Remember, I gotta look out for your ass, you know- and I sure as HELL ain't failing at that! *Siiiigh* Geeeez, you really don't make this easy. (Muttering in irritation) It's like babysitting a five year old.
(Smugly and a bit cheeky) I tooold you~ Anyway, suuure, I guess I can try to behave and ensure to make my presence known. I don't want to give Sladey a heart attack after all, I'm guessing he's lived through plenty of those in his time, hehe... (Flatly) ...Geeeez, I was just joking around. No need to be so boooring.
(Hissing, sounding quite excited, yelling near the end, furious) Do it. Do it, Ashy! He deserves it, you KNOW he does! We could end this now! RIGHT NOW! No one else needs to be afraid! NO ONE ELSE needs to suffer his FUCKING TORTURE! He'll NEVER hurt us again! (Speaking quicker, conveying the urgency) Do it! DO IT! DO IT! WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR?! YOU WANT FREEDOM, DON'T YOU?!
(Feeling lost and uncertain, afraid) I-I...I just don't know what to do. Normally it's always been me protecting Ashy..a-and now...I just...I-I don't know, it's way too much to process. Do I...have a purpose? Something bigger than...all of this? I...w-whatever it is, I've gotta find it. I-I do have a purpose...I belong here. I know I do...y-yeah *sniff* (Quickly trying to be strong again) N-no, not crying! Just...something in my eye!
*BONUS LINE: (Muffled, spoken best with something over the mouth) YMM BMMSTRDDS! LMM UMM GMMM!
Ah hey again Xarben! Thank you so much for trying out Achilles too! All your auditions really mean a lot to us! I will say your voice definitely does suit him better, you had some pretty good intonation and I loved how you took the cue with the dragged out lines, it really captured his character nicely, so that was very nicely done, clean and professional sounding as before! If I had to give a few pointers, the voice could do with being just a little lower and more gruff / rebellious. Also - be as expressive as you can here. Exaggerated even, because Achilles' loves exaggerating stuff and making his emotions known! Especially with regards to the second part of the first line, if spoken with gritted teeth and sounding really furious (as well as the 'do it do it' lines) could be done with more intensity. Have a listen to the other audition to get a feel for what I mean :) Also, his voice could do with being maybe a little faster and pauses a bit more pronounced, but these are just nitpicks! Feel free to try again if you want, but it's totally fine if not! You've got a great voice, nice work! :D
Hi Xarben, hope you're doing okay! I'm sorry you didn't make the final cut for one of our lead teens :( You gave it a really good shot but there was a lot of competition. However, the team loved your voice a lot and we think you'd be great trying out for our supporting cast if you're interested, but your voice is certainly more suiting of an adult role than a teen role, which is mostly what held you back here - and we have plenty of adults! The casting call won't be released for a good while, but you have talent and we'd love to have you! I hope you aren't too disappointed :( Good luck with future auditions, don't give up take care of yourself! :D