The Angel in the forest comic dub episode 2
Smearlull for Maurice
Maurice is the emotional one in his relationship with jack who is a little bit more on the gruff side. His voice can be soothing but not too soft. in the bat colony he and jack are also known for bulling Montimer who is the son of their current Alpha Mardoqueo. I would recommend NOT trying to make him sound too villainous or like the bad guy.
You're wanting to get the attention of Montimer as he is walking by
"Monti... monti... MONTIMER!"
Being a little coy you call montimer out
"Where were you? Words gone around saying you've been hanging out with a mouse"
Wanting to know more he begs a little
"Come on Montimer, are you planning on eating him later?"
Just realized that I submitted this audition for Maurice on September 21st. Rest in Peace Maurice White (and go listen to September by Earth Wind & Fire right now)
I would recommend slowing down your delivery, it sounds very quick paced. Best advice I could give on that would be " How would I sound talking like this to a person" hope it helps and I'm glad you have interest in the project and you're right I will do my best to make it awesome! Thank you for your audition!
Thanks for the advice! I am very new and I never even realized I had this problem so advice like this is very nice to get