I really enjoy the speed you have for Ghirahim's rant in the second line. My only notes to you are to include more emotion into your dialogue and cancel out any background noise in the audio. I'm not sure if it's because you're too close to the microphone, but there seems to be crackling noises between lines. An easy fix. As far as emotion goes, I feel as though the excitement is lost in the third line. As you say the line, try taking the tempo down a little bit and think about what thrills you. I hope this helps! Thank you very much for auditioning!