[CLOSED] A Brave New World (A Fallout New Vegas project)
Nathaniel for NCR soldier (Camp Mcarran) (Near Cristina Morales)
This soldier will be stationed in Camp Mcarran. He will be standing near a grieving woman. Anywhere from age 25 to 35.
Hello.
(sad) It's a shame what happened with Esteban
(sympathy) (sad) Man..Cristina's never been the same. She used to be cheerful and happy. But now....
I don't recognize you. How were you given clearance to be here?
Oh..so you're here to help Cristina........you're not the first. (sad laugh) It's...it's looking hopeless.
You know...I never understood the deal with these slot machines. It's just a waste of electricity.
Speaking of wasted energy, you ever heard of Helios One. I hear they got some major problems going on over there.
(Sad) Esteban was a good man. I'm glad you're here to help.
One quick comment. Could you make it "hopeless" instead of "helpless" for line 4? Also for line 3, could you make him slightly more mellow with his words. So it's not like "I don't recognize you!! but it's more like.....quietly saying, "I don't recognize you." So let me give you an example. Example 1 (which I don't want) is an enemy soldier looking through your disguise and saying, "Hey! I don't recognize you! (raises gun) <==Not looking for that tone. I'm looking more for a tone like this ==> Example 2 You go to a party. You're not invited to the party. A girl says to you, "Hey, I don't recognize you. Are you with the Smiths?" Sorta like that. Hope that makes sense.