My Angel || Minecraft Highschool ||
DeigenVG for Ben
Age: 17
Personality: Ben’s a really caring guy who looks after all his friends. He’s the kind of guy that would bring plasters to a concert in case anyone falls over. He loves helping people out. Despite his nice caring tendencies he’s also really playful.
Storyline: Despite Ben being really cheerful he has a really sad past. As a child he was really close to his Mother, so much that he even went to her book club to speak to her friends, however his brothers didn’t like him for that and often made fun of him out of jealousy. He often felt unwanted until his Dad moved out and took his brothers with him. Now Ben’s happy with his Mother and lives to make other people happy as well as himself.
Voice type: Ben's voice should be upbeat and happy, High/medium.
Lesson: Ben's story teaches people that their past shouldn't define them.
Hi Leah! Nice weather today! No I can't say that it's to needy... Yo bro! Yeah, no. This isn't getting any better... (He's speaking to himself in the mirror practicing how to talk to Leah)
Leah! Wanna race?
*Leah says no and starts walking away, Ben then runs up to her and ask's*
Why, are you too scared that I'm faster then you? I would be aswell I mean I'm pretty amazing...
(Leah *Minecraft punches* Ben)
*laugh*
I was really close with my Mom when I was little, so much that my brothers got jealous so they bullied me, but who's laughing now I'm in school getting a good education. Who knows maybe I'll become a lawyer and I can pay of my Mom's rent. *laugh*
I love you're voice so much! I also love the extra lines you added, you made the character you're own. This is the voice I imagined for Ben. It's playful and kind. The only advise I'd give is you gave a great voice so slow down when talking, other then that this was really good!
Thank you so much for the feedback I will make sure to do so in the future!