I do think it is the best of the auditions I've heard for Sandbar, so good work. Both your voice and delivery are good. The following is NOT a request for a retake but constructive criticism since you said you welcome feedback: Maybe slow down a little, not much, just a little. Your "Ponyville" has a popping sound on the "p". You added a word in the second line ("all") and missed a word on the last line. You said "even worse an alicorn princess" instead of "even worse for an alicorn princess." I won't be picky about stuff like that for auditions but would have you redo them for accuracy if I choose you for the role.