I like the audition, but the audio peaks too much, which resulted in some clipping. It would be preferable if you got that fixed please.
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The "fwaps" at the end, those peak and clip hard. You can tell when something peaks when the line/indicator goes at max height. At the start of each line too, they also peak. https://youtu.be/SUDl2lohcv4?t=38 Here's a good example of what they sound like.