The Master Mev (Team Awesome Arc, Chapters 1-11)
vanity for Fluttershy
Fluttershy based on the My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic TV series. This story takes place during season 8. The season acts as a backdrop or is notably changed throughout the chapters.
There is no song for this set of chapters but if this project is a success, she does sing in a much later chapter, which would be in a much later project.
Fluttershy is gentle and considerate. Her voice is soft and delicate. She and Rainbow Dash are long-time friends and casual girlfriends. Fluttershy is the first pony Rainbow turns to for help, and Fluttershy is very supportive of the transformation. She becomes the second fledgling and given the title Segunda. Fluttershy is hopeful that her own power can develop into a cognizant vampire bat pony form.
Chapter Appearances with dialogue:
Chapter 01 - The First Night
Chapter 03 - The First Meal
Chapter 04 - Waiting to Start the Pack
Chapter 06 - Blitz
Chapter 07 - Discordant Experience
Chapter 09 - Second Wind*
Chapter 10 - More Fledglings
Chapter 11 - Completing the Pack
*Basically title character for this chapter
Sample Dialogue from the actual My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic TV show: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PobxoBab4A8
Twilight said you should read this. See if you can make it through the night. The hunger should disappear during the day, so you can go about that as usual. Meet us for breakfast tomorrow at the castle. She's inviting the girls and sent a letter to Princess Celestia. Even if you do eat magic from a unicorn, the loss is not permanent, but you should still not eat any tonight. You'll find out more in the book.
(Context: Fluttershy says this to Rainbow Dash near the end of chapter 1. After Rainbow Dash becomes a master mev, and not knowing that's what it's called yet, she turns to Fluttershy for help to go talk to Twilight for her since she's afraid she might put Twilight in danger, being so hungry for magic. Fluttershy does that for Rainbow, goes to Rainbow's house after talking to Twilight, brings the book, and tells Rainbow Dash the dialogue above.)
Everyone, please. We're overwhelming her. Rainbow just got done telling us she's like a baby. A cute, cuddly, fanged, different-kind-of-wings-whenever-she-wants baby. Such a fascinating creature.
(Context: The other ponies are speculating and asking Rainbow Dash things she can't answer about her new powers. She is growing more and more irritated. Fluttershy comes to her defense. The dialogue for this line is described in text as: "Everyone, please." Fluttershy spoke up. "We're overwhelming her. Rainbow just got done telling us she's like a baby. A cute, cuddly, fanged, different-kind-of-wings-whenever-she-wants baby," Fluttershy lifted herself up with a smile. "Such a fascinating creature," she cooed.)
Rainbow Dash needs my help. Of course I'll be in her pack. If anything, you'll now have protection from mevs, not having to fear them. In fact, we actually wanted your help with something tonight if you're not too busy.
(Context: Fluttershy is talking to Discord. Discord actually finds mevs scary but is mildly comforted and hopeful when Fluttershy says that the group of friends, including Fluttershy herself, are helping Rainbow Dash form a pack.)
I do not mind although I was actually already very impressed by your first submission. I like your delivery of the first line here even better though I have noticed there is a stark difference in volume between the two submissions. I would prefer that, the volume, to be more like the first one or a happy medium between the two. You don't have to do a retake as I have faith that can be managed. Rest assured, overall, you're doing great! I want to wait on finalizing things until the deadline, so I can hear from more actors.
It's much better now that it is quieter in the re submission.