UNDERSTAGE: The Undertale Musical (act 1)
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In this adaptation, Doggo is the leader of a pack of dog Guards sent to catch Frisk in Snowdin. He has trouble seeing things around him if they're sitting too still, which makes it easy to sneak up on him. He is naturally jumpy because of this.
Now, let's be sure that everyone is here! We've got a mission to take care of. Undyne sent us here to find that human that's been crawling around... mostly because the guards that were here before are uh. Less than competent. So stay sharp! Each of us can basically only rely on one of our senses so.. that's why I brought you all here.
Arf! I think I see something moving down there... but it's hard to tell when they're sitting so still.
Eep! I felt something touch my tail! Am I being... PET?!
Woof! Pet? Pot? Pat? How is this possible?!
Dogamy! Dogaressa! You check it out, It's getting scary!
(Singing examples in the character's voice, mid to high range)
i have some directions! you're pretty close to the mic still, the popping is really distracting.. I like the delivery in general, but are you able to make him sound older? also, make sure you're not slurring any of the words; if i hadn't written them myself, i wouldn't have really been able to understand them that's all i think!
Thanks for the feedback and will do!