Checkmate: The Game of Life [Episode 1]
bellad1243 for Jeanna Mossmer [Main Character]
[Calming/Cheerful] “Hey, don’t worry about it. It’ll be alright...” *soft chuckling.*
[Happy] "Mason! It's so good to see you! How have you been? How's Kaitlyn?"
[Worried] *sigh* "I just hope this all blows over soon… I hate seeing Patrick angry all the time."
[Angered/Totally Done] “Irrational?! I’m IRRATIONAL?! Do NOT tell me I'm being irrational! We just had one of our friends, your best friend, might I mention, taken because of something we could have helped prevent!!”
[Avoiding Topic/Optimistic] “Anyway, uhm, you don’t need to be sorry for wanting to be around us so often. It really doesn’t bother me, you’re reaching out for help. *searches for words* Patrick… He’s coming around to it.”
Hey there! Your voice for Jeanna was great, but there were a few things I think you can improve on. Try with being louder and showing more emotion. For example, the "Irrational" line was meant to be said with anger and frustration behind it. When you said the line it was more disappointed. Hope this helps!
thank you! would it be alright if i redid my audition? if not, that’s okay!
Go right ahead!