1602 - Witch Hunter Angela - Part One [Comic Dub]
kaichisholm for Kit Marlowe
A playwright in the tavern who seems to know more about people than others realise. He is somewhat socially inept, not being aware of others during his conversations until he wants them to speak.
(Excited) Like Doctor Faustus and Mephistopheles. Perhaps you do not know, dear lady, but I have written a play of that very name-- [Kit is not aware of Angela's input into this conversation, he's just happy to talk about his play.]
(Inquisitve) Lady Serah knows me well. But she does not know me so well, I think, as she knows you. Or as well as you would have her know you. [Kit is very hesitant to trust Angela, especially with someone like Serah who he's come to consider a friend. Emphasis on the words in bold.]
(Scared) That woman… Angela… Serah, she can only lead you down a dark path. [Kit has seen what Angela's life is like and is begging Serah not to go with her, otherwise it could lead to her own darkness.]
I like the emotion you brought to the last line, I will agree I think the voice you went with needs some more work as I'm not sure but I think I heard you break once or twice during the reading. I will say though that you did a fantastic job with the pace and emphasis of the reading, really well done.
Thank you for listening! I had a ball reading for this character. May I ask where the breaks are specifically so that I may work on the voice for future auditions?