1602 - Witch Hunter Angela - Part One [Comic Dub]
Phantomhive for Enchantress
The Enchantress is part of the faerie realm and so she should have an air of mystery about her voice, she is also mocking whoever she is speaking to for the majority of her lines. The Enchantress speaks in old English a lot so some of your lines may not make sense at first glance, please double check before submitting any lines, any questions please ask before you record.
The Enchantress will be the main antagonist of the story and future projects.
(False comfort) Hasten home. They shall hunt for thee. With sword and spear and spell… they shall hunt thee. [The Enchantress is trying to show some false comfort to someone who has just made a deal with her to save their life. There should be some hint of danger in her voice on the bold word.]
(Sarcastic) Rather a hell of a herald, was he not? What a pity. He was so handsome. [This follows the death of one of the Enchantress' minions. Usual emphasis on the bold word.]
(Mocking) Happy hunting, Good Sister Angela... [This is just after the Enchantress has threatened Angela with the death of someone close to her. There should be emphasis on the bold of this line.]
So my first and I think obvious criticism is the sound quality, it sounds as though this was recorded on a phone, webcam, or a very dated microphone. I don't know whether this was yourself or the mic not recording well but it also seemed like you had some pacing issues with the second line. I like the voice you went for, it had the antagonism I'm looking for while still having the air of mystery and ethereal-ism that is core to the character, you also, even with the quality of microphone you used, managed to get across some of the emotion I'm looking for behind her laughs and mannerisms. Honestly I think if you can upgrade your setup you would have no worries finding roles!
This was the most on point criticism I got. Thank you so much for helping out! I'd look forward in improving with the content. I 'm actually using a newly bought mic. I'll do my best to improve with the pacing.
I would have a look at the settings on the mic then because in this audition you sounded as though you were underwater but your other audition sounded better, not perfect but the quality was noticeably better. I look forward to seeing what you do in the future! :)