Psupers Episode 1
deleted179211 for Dr Dortmann
Dr. Ivan Dortmann has seen it all, and it shows. He has a very fatherly attitude towards psupers, having diagnosed dozens if not hundreds at this point, and this results in him often treating the harsher realities of D26 very lightly.
Cases like yours are quite rare, especially in this part of the country, which makes your results all the more intriguing.
Several things - glucose levels, neurological activity, blood pH level, etc. However, of most particular interest to us is this one right here.
Your life expectancy shouldn’t decrease by much if at all. In terms of symptoms, you seem to have already experienced most of the major ones - headaches, dizziness, frequent gastrointestinal distress. My guess would be that you’ll start to see new developments within the next six to twelve weeks.
That was pretty good! I like how nonchalant you made Dortmann seem. If I had any suggestions, I'd say maybe put a little more energy into the character - you sounded a little bored. Other than that, great job!
thanks! I appreciate the feedback!