1602 - Witch Hunter Angela - Part One [Comic Dub]
rzy for Enchantress
The Enchantress is part of the faerie realm and so she should have an air of mystery about her voice, she is also mocking whoever she is speaking to for the majority of her lines. The Enchantress speaks in old English a lot so some of your lines may not make sense at first glance, please double check before submitting any lines, any questions please ask before you record.
The Enchantress will be the main antagonist of the story and future projects.
(False comfort) Hasten home. They shall hunt for thee. With sword and spear and spell… they shall hunt thee. [The Enchantress is trying to show some false comfort to someone who has just made a deal with her to save their life. There should be some hint of danger in her voice on the bold word.]
(Sarcastic) Rather a hell of a herald, was he not? What a pity. He was so handsome. [This follows the death of one of the Enchantress' minions. Usual emphasis on the bold word.]
(Mocking) Happy hunting, Good Sister Angela... [This is just after the Enchantress has threatened Angela with the death of someone close to her. There should be emphasis on the bold of this line.]
So I've started deciding on who I'm going to cast in which role and Enchantress is proving to be an incredibly difficult one to choose! This was a great take! I don't believe you have 0 experience, I can't think of much criticism to give which sucks because if you are new I wish I could give you more guidance or something to work on haha. If I do end up going with you I hope there are more areas I can help you with to get even better than you apparently naturally are!
Listening back to this, I feel as though one criticism I have is that you don't feel antagonistic, the voice definitely matches the mysterious vibe I'm looking for, however she is also the main antagonist of the story, if you could maybe try with a bit more power in her voice?