Monarch - Casting Call [PAID] - Sims 2 Film
LaurenReganVO for Margaret Ballord
♔ English/British accent required♔
A closer friend than most royals to Eliza, though still distant. Margaret is empathetic toward the heiress in times of distress and genuinely attempts to cheer Eliza up in weary situations. Though the heiress does not fully appreciate her presence, Margaret is surely somewhere in the background to console Eliza whenever needed - whether welcomed or not.
[110 lines/sound effects, $1.00 per line]
[Medium pitch]
[Receptive, down-to-Earth, considerate]
[White]
Line 1: (hushed, but grinning) Here, take the treats before anyone sees! Your mother’s informed the entire castle of your detention.
Line 2: (raising an eyebrow, teasing) Oh, Atticus, are you scared she's trying to replace you? You know how Eliza loves you.
Line 3: (terrified, upset, shaming, hurried) Are you really going to let this happen?
Line 4: (concerned, empathetic, growing upset, but composed) There is nothing you can do, Eliza. I know you’re upset, but you cannot sit around and soak in your pain forever.
Thank you for auditioning! For the first, third, and fourth lines, your pacing felt a little off and it sounded more like you were reading rather than feeling and acting on the emotion, if that makes sense. I think you're getting close though! I might worry less about sounding "composed" and drive right to the emotion when approaching lines. I think you could loosen up your approach a bit and the lines would feel more natural!
Thanks, yes that does make sense and is really helpful feedback.