I really enjoyed this audition. I definitely had a higher voice in mind, but yours might have changed my mind a little. I'd really like to get you to read the second line again. Read it over a couple of times and try to make the phrasing more natural. Also, I'd love to hear it with more smile. Your voice sounds different when you have a smile on your face; it's a brighter tone. Definitely don't change to the point where you feel uncomfortable, but gimme another run at it. You can email it to me at [email protected]. Oh, and if you wanted to do the other two lines again: "Shinobu" is correct, not "Shinobi" (really minor incident), and the third line, gimme a hard emphasis on the word "girl". He's talking to Senjougahara who is a teenager and pretty mature, but he condescends to her here. Make his venom apparent. Good work.