Thanks so much for auditioning! The only qualms I have here is some background noise, and the laughter at the end doesn't seem too natural. The acting on the previous lines are great, though!
Hi! Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it! If I may ask, what kind of background noise did you hear? Just so that I can avoid it next time!
There's slight reverberation in the room you're in as well as a slight muffling in the quality, and I can hear some clicks in the background a few times. Noise reduction through Audacity may help make everything sound clearer! I hope I helped!