Arknights - Fandub Project
Tanner McChristian for The Doctor
A person of an unknown nature and even more unknown agenda, the Doctor is the Supreme Commander of the forces of Rhodes Islands and its primary staff officer when it comes to its operators. While the remains of his history and memory remain a partial mystery, even to those that knew him before his retrieval, he remains a figure of respect and honor within Rhodes Island.
The Doctor's emotional state is marred by the same human fear and emotions that carry over those that have seen too much suffering and violence in the world, a person who remembers his own powers a leader as well as how much the responsibility entails. Even to him, the long shadows of his past may close in the comings months, as his own history eventually will catch up to what Kalt'sit considers a violent end.
Voice Range: Medium High - Medium - Medium-Low; Worn Down - Calculated - Well Spoken.
On the Nature of Communion - Intrigued Recitation
You do know ants, right? Then you should know ants love carrion. Even though the carrion is still rotting, the ants will still rip it to tiny chunks and carry them back to their nest to feed the whole community.On Liskarm's Reason for Joining BSW - Respectful Thought
She wasn't interested in money or the thrill of combat. She just wanted to use her weapons to bring peace, not chaos, to the people.On Executor's Service Record - Growing Fear
The third item saw the death of a Laterano citizen serving as the chief executive of a city state guard unit. And the fourth item nearly caused a war...most of Executor's mission record is like this.
Pitch is actually fine and just within boundaries for the character, however it's the craggy and raspy voice you have that's affecting the audition in a negative manner. The tone itself isn't bad, as you do have that brooding and weary base for the character but I think the pitch is actually hurting it by making it seem older or more tired than it needs to be. Delivery isn't bad, there's a nice pace for this one that's well kept throughout the whole audition, but it works best for the initial line where you kept it the most consistent.
Thank you for the feedback. Would it be possible to resubmit the audition with those critiques in mind?