Deadliest Plateau
thatvoiceguy for Duke
This is HQ; the voice is expected to be assertive, as you would expect your commander. No need for extra drama here.
Bones, this is Duke Actual. How long until you reach your objective?
Get it done asap. Torch reports two armored platoons leaving Eponia for the front lines. We suspect there is an enemy anti-armor team set up close to you in anticipation of our push to Bagango. Take over their position, and stop that column. They’ll be reaching our lines in 10 to 15 minutes.
I expect you’re setting up to intercept the column by now. They’ll be within view soon. Husky sent a few vehicles your way to extract you - they’ll be coming through the pass north of your location. Join up with them as soon as your mission is complete; we expect the enemy to pursue. Best of luck. Duke out.
This is awesome, thank you so very much!
I'm not sure what you need moving forward, but I'll redo these, or at least the last line. I'm not sure why it cut out a few of my words... Thanks for casting me! 😃
If you are happy to redo it, by all means! I have no problem with you changing some of those words if the flow works better for you, by the way. You nailed the flow, and the tone, and your equipment is excellent so the sound is clear. One way or the other, how would you like to be credited?