Arknights - Fandub Project
Saucy Salmon for The Doctor
A person of an unknown nature and even more unknown agenda, the Doctor is the Supreme Commander of the forces of Rhodes Islands and its primary staff officer when it comes to its operators. While the remains of his history and memory remain a partial mystery, even to those that knew him before his retrieval, he remains a figure of respect and honor within Rhodes Island.
The Doctor's emotional state is marred by the same human fear and emotions that carry over those that have seen too much suffering and violence in the world, a person who remembers his own powers a leader as well as how much the responsibility entails. Even to him, the long shadows of his past may close in the comings months, as his own history eventually will catch up to what Kalt'sit considers a violent end.
Voice Range: Medium High - Medium - Medium-Low; Worn Down - Calculated - Well Spoken.
On the Nature of Communion - Intrigued Recitation
You do know ants, right? Then you should know ants love carrion. Even though the carrion is still rotting, the ants will still rip it to tiny chunks and carry them back to their nest to feed the whole community.On Liskarm's Reason for Joining BSW - Respectful Thought
She wasn't interested in money or the thrill of combat. She just wanted to use her weapons to bring peace, not chaos, to the people.On Executor's Service Record - Growing Fear
The third item saw the death of a Laterano citizen serving as the chief executive of a city state guard unit. And the fourth item nearly caused a war...most of Executor's mission record is like this.
Tone isn't appropriate here, it's much too casual and non-chalant for what should be a war weary and wise character that's trying to oversee the operators working under him. Delivery is very strange, as you have an uneven pace here that comes off as too slow and has irregular breaks in your lines that take way too long for the speech to sound natural. Pitch is within the boundaries for the character, but it's not going to aid the other sections of your audition, so please work on fixing these concerns before you re-submit your audition.
Thank you for your very in-depth critique!