Arknights - Fandub Project
Ajax027 for The Doctor
A person of an unknown nature and even more unknown agenda, the Doctor is the Supreme Commander of the forces of Rhodes Islands and its primary staff officer when it comes to its operators. While the remains of his history and memory remain a partial mystery, even to those that knew him before his retrieval, he remains a figure of respect and honor within Rhodes Island.
The Doctor's emotional state is marred by the same human fear and emotions that carry over those that have seen too much suffering and violence in the world, a person who remembers his own powers a leader as well as how much the responsibility entails. Even to him, the long shadows of his past may close in the comings months, as his own history eventually will catch up to what Kalt'sit considers a violent end.
Voice Range: Medium High - Medium - Medium-Low; Worn Down - Calculated - Well Spoken.
On the Nature of Communion - Intrigued Recitation
You do know ants, right? Then you should know ants love carrion. Even though the carrion is still rotting, the ants will still rip it to tiny chunks and carry them back to their nest to feed the whole community.On Liskarm's Reason for Joining BSW - Respectful Thought
She wasn't interested in money or the thrill of combat. She just wanted to use her weapons to bring peace, not chaos, to the people.On Executor's Service Record - Growing Fear
The third item saw the death of a Laterano citizen serving as the chief executive of a city state guard unit. And the fourth item nearly caused a war...most of Executor's mission record is like this.
I have no idea why you thought going with that throaty, low voice on the first take was appropriate but I'll take the second one since the more natural voice you give off fits the pitch better for this character. Tone itself is fine, there's no issues with the more reserved and calm attitude you're taking here though I think you could put in a bit more emotional backing behind the final line since there's a twinge of fear missing there. Delivery is otherwise fine, there's no issues with pacing here and the inflection you giving during your reading is fine for the tone you're going for here.
On my initial of the character description I thought it said revived instead of retrieved. So I decided to do a brought-back-from-the-dead type voice for him. If you'd like me to do another record with a different take instead of the first one, I'm happy to do it Thanks for the feedback
Oh, I see though that's honestly kind of funny that it did turn out sounding undead. Props to you for that at least, since I now know the context. I'd say, if you want to give it a re-submission then go for it but take my criticism into account.