Your line delivery is great! Sadly, though, your voice is a little too young for Mia, and your recording quality doesn't really help either. Thank you for auditioning!
Thanks so much for the opportunity! Is there any mics you would recommend so I can improve future auditions?
I'm not sure what you have now, but a good lower-budget option is the Snowball Ice or the Blue Yeti. For a higher price (but with better quality and a longer lifespan), pretty much anything from RODE or Shure, but you will need an audio interface for those.
I'll look into those, thanks for your recommendations!