I like this audition a lot! You get the tone of Mia across perfectly - the stern/kind balance, which is very important for her character. The one thing I think holding this back is either that she sounds a little too young, or a little too high-pitched. I can't work out which of those it is, or if they just come hand-in-hand and it's both. Either way, thanks so much for auditioning!
Thank you for the feedback! What you're hearing is probably the youngish quality, which is kinda intrinsic to my voice. I tend to audition for characters like Maya or Ema because of that haha. Thanks for listening!