Arknights - Fandub Project
Gale for Courier
Just as his code-name implies, Courier is the main messenger between SilverAsh's Karlan Trade Company and potential partner leaders while also serving as a forward scout for military expeditions. In spite of this, Courier's smile never seems to fade, giving him a pleasant and welcoming attitude whenever he's with foreign dignitaries and company heads or when in the middle of an operation under Rhodes Island.
Courier is the antithesis to the stereotypical Kjerag native, as his sunny disposition and welcoming smile lend themselves to plenty of good first impressions with the operators he now works under. To those he trusts though, particularly SilverAsh, a new calm and unsmiling expression will dot his face, along with a more severe demeanor in combat, of which his many battle scars are testaments to.
Voice: Medium - Medium-High; Welcoming - Pleasant - Focused
Meeting Player - Respectful Bow
Esteemed Leader of Rhodes Island, your ally—Courier of the Snow Realm—is here at your service. If you ever get into trouble during your contract with Sir SilverAsh, just snap your fingers and I'll come.Veteran Memory - Unshaken Creed
I owe my life to Sir SilverAsh. If necessary, I'll do anything for him.Battle Quotes - Intense Refrain
Speeding up! Haaagh!
This is a tough one for me, because on one hand you have this a very good facade of a knowing friend with how you handled Courier's tone, like someone who's known the player for a long time. On the other hand, it doesn't have enough of the inviting, dulcet tone for the character, though I think your delivery of his lines alone may overcome this issue. Pitch is where it needs to be, a young man's voice accented with good annunciation, particularly in your take for the first of the final lines that add an air of confidence to his character. In a way, I think the unorthodox nature of the lines delivery do add to this one so take my words with a grain of salt.
Regardless this is very helpful critique. Thank you for that.