The Breakfast Club Alternate Version (9M/8F)
janinec for Claire Standish
Bio: This young lady from a wealthy background is one of the students at Shermer High. Claire comes from a rather wealthy family however she has no desire to flaunt her family's financial wealth as she is actually bitter about her family due to how her parents are going through a bad divorce. While she certainly does seem to have a lot of contempt for Bender and Allison especially at first but she does certainly befriend Andy and Brian though. Even though Claire can be very uptight and judgmental she can be quick to defend those she has befriended namely Andy and Brian from Bender and Allison. However Claire does like to think of herself as a Realist even if it means sayting things that she will end up regretting later.
1. (Slight annoyed, Matter-of-fact) Oh shut up and stopping speaking like you know us. I mean its like I said earlier you are too much of a coward and you put up this arrogant obnoxious act just to hide that.
2. (Uptight & Snobbish) I said Moliere you uncultured swine, Jean-Baptiste Poquelin is a famous French playwright from the 1600s who is known by his stage name Moliere. You shouldnt be tearing up classic literature like that.3. (Shocked and Disgusted) Having a little snack huh? Let me get this straight, you are eating something while on the toilet.
4. (Happy & Excited then Embarassed) Oh Yummy! Gimme gimme! I love croissants! Oh thank you, thank you! .... What? So so I have a little thing for French Cuisine okay? Besides dont you two have a lunch to eat?5. (Firm but tries to be Understanding) Look Andy if you dont want to beat up girls I understand that but that doesnt mean you should ignore the fact that freaky girl Allison is just as much of a pest as that perverted creep Bender.
6. (Offended & Very Defensive) Lacking?! I am so not lacking! I happen to be more modestly figured thank you very much. Isnt that right Andy?
First of all sorry that I am so late in giving a reply (my little sister graduated from High School yesterday) Anyways... + Very good! Your voice works for the role rather well and your performance was for the most part rather spot on. - Though your take on Line 3 while not really bad was a bit flat, that and the quality of your Mic is a little iffy. (Namely how you can hear the fan pretty loudly fortunately it doesn't overpower your lines). Still this was a rather good audition if I do say so myself.
It's quite alright, thank you for the feedback! Apologies on the Mic, I recorded this on my phone. I can do away with the fan in the background next time :)