I hate doing this to people, since I don't want to be seen as lazy for generalizing an entire line of auditions here, but there's such a consistent degree and amount of faults within this audition and all of the others you submitted here. The pitch is way off, in fact I think it's a similar voice range throughout all of your auditions that only changes slightly in volume to attempt to mask the overall pitch. Tone is inconsistent or over the top, where it's not only disparate from what the emotion of the line should be but also takes away from your quality. Delivery is probably the most egregious aspect, as you're either over emphasizing some lines or much too fast or slow in others and it gets in the way of making the readings sound natural. Please look back on all of these criticisms before you re-audition, since I think you can certainly improve from her substantially.