Arknights - Fandub Project
OtsdarvaInteger for SilverAsh
Warlord, chairman, household chief, SilverAsh is all of these things as one of the most powerful people in the Kjerag nation and now strategic player within the upper echelon of Rhodes Island. No one knows the true purpose behind his arrival and contract with the pharmaceutical company, but even the Doctor knows to keep such an influential individual at a close proximity.
SilverAsh is the combination of a dandy aristocrat and a noble entrepreneur, except he's got the military and combat training to put anyone in their place if diplomacy and money fail. Every word and statement from him appear a winding web of hidden meaning and surreptitious lies, with even his own family being in the dark about his true motives.
Voice: Low - Medium-Low; Proud - Charismatic - Wise
Meeting Player - Respectful Forewarning
I, SilverAsh, have joined your cause as a sworn ally. Whatever your plans may be, do not disappoint me.Veteran Memory - Dominant Agreement
I'm well aware this contract offers me nothing... What does that matter? I shall accept this unequal treaty nonetheless. The reason being that I, SilverAsh, recognize that you warrant it.Battle Quotes - Confident Recitation
"The fool flaunting his gallantry reaches none with his vanity..." "Art thou mine worthy enemy, or art thou naught but a jester?"
Pitch is spot on here, even the rougher nature of your voice, as it suits the character's age and aids in giving him a more imposing tone. Tone itself doesn't have any issues here, you properly adapted the character's suave and striking personality well with each of your lines as well as giving him this cold confidence throughout the audition. Delivery is mostly well executed, as you kept a good, natural pace for your lines annunciated well when necessary with the exception of the final line which needed a bit more force mixed in as it's recited during combat.
Thank you! I was mostly trying to figure out how to get the last line down pat while keeping the gruffness of his character intact. Nevertheless, I appreciate the critique and will aim to improve further.