Baten Kaitos: Eternal Wings and the Lost Ocean - Episode 2 (Seeking Additional Characters) - [CLOSED]
WhimsyPlush for Cautious Bar Patron (One-shot)*
A quiet regular at the Pherkad bar. If Kalas speaks to him, he'll warn Kalas to stay away from Imperial Soldiers, calling them creeps and claiming they're quick to violence. All 8 of his lines appear in this audition, so if you nail this role, you won't be required to record anything else unless retakes are needed.*
(hushed, quietly, speaking of the Imperial Soldiers) "Have you seen them? The creeps who came on that ship? They’re like rabid animals. They get violent at the drop of a hat."
"Those guys really scare me. If you know what’s good for you, you’ll stay away from them, too."
(warning Kalas) "Hey, remember what I told you. Stay away from those creeps or you’re cruisin’ for a bruisin’."
I do like that you sound more intense here, but it also sounds like you might be rushing through lines just a bit. Your first delivery did the best at portraying caution, so my suggestion would be to go off your first audition as an example (but a little louder), and slow down some, especially for that last line, like you're emphasizing how important it is to be careful. 👍
Understood! I'll do my best to make sure the next one takes the best of both takes in mind.
Much appreciated, thank you!