Arknights - Fandub Project
Ladycia for Dobermann
Dobermann is an ex-member of the Bolivarian Armed Forces who now serves as Rhodes Island's head drill instructor for new recruits as well as a health director for its operators. While she's seen as a fearsome and somewhat detestable figure in Rhodes Island, her harshness is something the operators have come to understand as an incentive to improve.
Dobermann is strict to a fault and uncompromising in holding recruits and current operators to a high physical standard to keep up with the challenges ahead. For this, she employs a loud voice and harsh words to get Rhodes Island's operators ready for anything Reunion can put in front of them, along with a fierce skill with the whip when words fail.
Voice: Medium Low - Low ; Strict - Disciplined - Dominant
Meeting Player - Stern Introduction
Attention! I am Dobermann, former military instructor for the Bolívarian armed forces. Now, let's cut to the chase. Please hand over the list of Operators in need of training.Veteran Memory - Inflexible Response
You looking for the newbies? They're training out on the Rhodes Island deck. Yeah, I know what the weather's like right now, of course. Got a problem with that?Battle Quotes - Furious Assault
Filthy Scum.Tear 'em up!
There's a slight bit of pop-in for some of your louder lines, please try to fix that if you re-audition. Second takes on your audition here are better in terms of delivery, as your words come out a bit clearer in your dialogue and the pronunciation is better. Pitch is fine, it compliments the tone well though it could a little lower to suit the character's age better. Tone itself is well executed, holding a strong sense of authority and a moral attitude for the character, particularly in the second line where you gave a good inflictive impact with the final line. The one complaint I have is that for the final line, please separate the lines as they're not a single dialogue and give them a slow and more impactful delivery.
Thank you so much for the feedback! think it's absolutely important to listen and learn from critiques! I will upload some new takes, I hope it's better :D