Persona 5 Adult Confidant AU Comic Dubs
NerdtotheThird for Munehisa Iwai
The walking textbook definition of not judging a book by its cover. Munehisa Iwai is a good boy who just so happens to be the son of a Yakuza leader. It was thanks to the same man he helped with less than reputable deeds that he also was able to pursue his education for a brighter and cleaner future. However, all of that came crashing down thanks to a certain prince of volleyball who spread rumours of his shady past. So, of course Iwai is going to do what he does best: settle this kind of affair internally and discretely.
( disgruntled with a huff. ) ❝ You should be grateful. ❞
( chuckles softly, sounds cocky ). ❝ Well, that’s on a need to know basis, and you don’t need to know. ❞
( flabbergasted, just genuine confusion. ) ❝ This doesn’t make us friends, you braindead idiot!❞
Heya! Very solid audition, my only critique here is your last line. You’ve good intonation and all, but it seems like you lost all steam with the last line. I’m looking for visible frustration, complete exasperation. Don’t be afraid to let it all out.
I appreciate the feedback; would you like me to re-record these lines?