Arknights - Fandub Project
Rehnay for Matterhorn
SilverAsh's personal bodyguard and officer for the Karlan Trade Company, Matterhorn's duties are complimented by his enduring attitude to the Kjerag warrior creed of forlorn hope, making him fight as if every engagement is his last. Despite this fatalist perspective, Matternhorn has more than endeared himself to Rhodes Island's operators as a culinary specialist from his homeland as well as an inspiring symbol of selflessness.
Matterhorn's creed is one of self-sacrifice and the welfare of those he's sworn to, a modern rendition of a chivalrous knight that still has enough of a sense of duty to aid those along the way. This has been a longstanding creed with his family, as they also served as the bodyguards of SilverAsh's family before him, giving him a greater degree of loyalty to the current head than his other retainers.
Voice: Low - Medium - Low; Selfless - Responsible - Devoted
Meeting Player - Courteous Salute
Ally, I salute you in true Snow Realm fashion. I am codename Matterhorn, one of the guards dispatched here by Master SilverAsh.Veteran Memory - Shy Revelation
Life at Rhodes Island is fun. The Snow Realm is rather bland in comparison, b-but don't let Master Silverash know that.Battle Quotes -Forceful Movement
I'm not here just for show! You lack discipline!
Pitch needs to be much lower, as it's not appropriate for the character's age nor is it aiding in your tone's authenticity much here. Tone itself is confused for both of your takes, as you're making him come off as too boisterous and not noble enough which is the exact opposite for what this character should sound like. Delivery is almost there, as your pace just needs to slow down a bit and your annunciation to increase for the final lines where it's not getting enough strength on your voice.
Thanks a lot for the feedback, won't be reauditioning, but the detailed feedback you give definitely gives me things to work with / on and things to pay attention to in the future.