Danganronpa Comic/Meme Fandubs
Yan for Kiyotaka "Taka" Ishimaru
The Ultimate Moral Compass.
"I'm Kiyotaka Ishimaru. I believe in bold simplicity! Let's work together on our educational crusade!"
"Just a moment! There's something else we must address! Makoto! Your tardiness is unacceptable! Surely you were aware the meeting was to start at 8 a.m. sharp! To be late on your first day is unspeakable! I must report you, and you must accept your due punishment!"
"Well what do you want me to do!? Punctuality is everything!"
Your voice isn't at the right volume. Also, it's not at the right pitch. I would recommend you listen to Sean Chiplock first so you can get a general idea of what sound I am looking for. Also - there is too much hum in the background. If you have any kind of DAW software there ought to be a Noise Gate plugin that cancels out any kind of background noises.
Thank you for the advice!
It isn't really the pitch or volume, since you seem to have those down. I'm more concerned about breaking sentences, I guess. I think that it's a really good impression for him, just needs to like, stay consistent with the same voice you had in the first take